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Lesson 40: Revising and editing a first draft

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Students use peer review to revise and edit the first drafts of their stories.

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Stories Julian Tells

Lesson 18: “Our Garden” and identifying connections between sections and parts
- Created by: Louisiana Department of Education
Lesson 19: Formulating an opinion statement and gathering reasons to support
- Created by: Louisiana Department of Education
Lesson 20: “Because of Figs” and answering questions in complete sentences
- Created by: Louisiana Department of Education
Lesson 21: Tracking character contributions and changes across chapters
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Lesson 22: Drafting an opinion essay
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Lesson 23: “Gloria Who Might Be My Best Friend” and point of view
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Lesson 24: Brainstorming story elements
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Lesson 25: Brainstorming sequence of events
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Lesson 26: “I Learn Firefighting: I Wish for Smokey the Bear” independent reading and partner discussion
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Lesson 27: Discussing nonliteral language and meaning
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Lesson 28: Cold-read task, part 1
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Lesson 29: Cold-read task, part 2
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Lesson 30: Cold-read task, part 3
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Lesson 31: Brainstorming for the culminating writing task
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Lesson 32: Writing a first draft of the culminating writing task
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Lesson 33: Drafting a conclusion and revising
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Lesson 34: Editing and publishing opinion essays
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Lesson 35: Brainstorming ideas for a narrative story
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Lesson 36: Reading and discussing "The Red Book"
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Lesson 37: Rehearsing and ordering events
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Lesson 38: Brainstorming the introduction and conclusion
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Lesson 39: Writing the first draft
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Lesson 40: Revising and editing a first draft
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Lesson 41: Publishing and creating a visual
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Lesson 42: Presenting in a silent gallery walk
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Stories Julian Tells

Lesson 18: “Our Garden” and identifying connections between sections and parts

Lesson 19: Formulating an opinion statement and gathering reasons to support

Lesson 20: “Because of Figs” and answering questions in complete sentences

Lesson 21: Tracking character contributions and changes across chapters

Lesson 22: Drafting an opinion essay

Lesson 23: “Gloria Who Might Be My Best Friend” and point of view

Lesson 24: Brainstorming story elements

Lesson 25: Brainstorming sequence of events

Lesson 26: “I Learn Firefighting: I Wish for Smokey the Bear” independent reading and partner discussion

Lesson 27: Discussing nonliteral language and meaning

Lesson 28: Cold-read task, part 1

Lesson 29: Cold-read task, part 2

Lesson 30: Cold-read task, part 3

Lesson 31: Brainstorming for the culminating writing task

Lesson 32: Writing a first draft of the culminating writing task

Lesson 33: Drafting a conclusion and revising

Lesson 34: Editing and publishing opinion essays

Lesson 35: Brainstorming ideas for a narrative story

Lesson 36: Reading and discussing "The Red Book"

Lesson 37: Rehearsing and ordering events

Lesson 38: Brainstorming the introduction and conclusion

Lesson 39: Writing the first draft

Lesson 40: Revising and editing a first draft

Lesson 41: Publishing and creating a visual

Lesson 42: Presenting in a silent gallery walk

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